This is the feedback that we receieved from our teacher...
"There needs to be more of a narrative progression. Keep Dan as the focus but you need to develop your other characters otherwise the video doesn't work. You should be cutting into yout footage more; clips are too long. The exposure on the outdoor clips hasnt quite worked and its not obvious to the viewer what the relevance of going outside is if this is a house party? Good angles and camera movement; also good performance."
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