Ancillary Feedback - Q1 23

Hello group Q1 20, we are group Q1 23 (the group across the room) and we are commenting on your Ancillary project.

Firstly the positives. We thought that the effects used on the magazine advert, with the second image of the main artist emerged into the top right had corner of the magazine, very effective as it gives another dimension to the picture and keeps it interesting and not plain.
Also the picture which was used for the inside of the digi pak was very good. It was clever how they decided to use the picture cut up through all three spaces with a continuos picture. Also the idea of using alcohol bottles was good as it linked to the theme of the song. But i would have used empty bottles as it could give a better picture, and linking with the song more shown how much of a good party it was.
The way the have used the bottles picture and edited was very creative and gave another look onto the digi pak of not just normal unedited photo's.
I thought the way they used white coloured writing on the black background enhanced the visibility so it can stand out and been seen easily and affectively. Also with he subject of the information they included all the needed information for a digi pak including the songs and places the public can purchase the product.

Negatives. I thought the pictures were too dark for a happy and upbeat song. The pictures and editing would be one seen for a rock song or sad song. So although what they did was good, i thought that it was with the wrong theme and genre.
Also the picture of the front of the digi pak looked like the artist was dead and yet again, does not link with the genre of the song.